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Sunday
I finished my final paper for my ESL endorsement. SQUEEEE!
I wrapped up the evening with a bit of basketball, watching Iowa lose to TCU. BOOOOO!
I snuggled into bed under two blankets. WARM!
I quickly fell asleep. ZZZZ!
Approximately 2:00 a.m. Monday
I awoke to a terrible sound. CRASH!
It was an intense thunderstorm with lightning. FLASH! BOOM!
Allison came to my room to chat and joke. GIGGLE!
I fell asleep again. ZZZZZ!
5:50 a.m.
I woke up to the alarm. BEEP BEEP BEEP!
I rolled over for 15 more minutes. GROAN!
I got ready for the day. SHHHHHH! WHIRRRR!
I drank a big cup of coffee. SLURRRRP!
7:15 a.m.
I placed all my bags in the car. SLAM!
I heard a noise behind me. SQUAWK!
Come back on Tuesday to get the rest of the story!
Love it! The noises helped to make me feel like I was there. Can't wait for tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteI love this! The noises are so playful, and add a great character to the story! I can definitely see myself using this as a mentor text in the future. Thanks!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a clever slice! I can't wait to see what went "Squawk!"
ReplyDeleteI love this structure! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteAhh...what a tease!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the time stamps to show us the range of these events in your life. Can't wait to read next!
ReplyDeleteLove this! I love all of your sound words as well as the events of your day being presented to us. Looking forward to what's coming next tomorrow!
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